I don't mind yellow as a trim, if only as an outer trim.
Can you post pics of the SuperSonics red? I seemed to be ok with the way it was
used.
Ok, now I see the new logos, at the end of the video.
1). Yield sign logo: Completely unnecessary. There doesn't need to be this many
logos.
And why even a yield sign? You want rockets to overpower, not yield.
2). R logo: Never liked this one too much. Now it's even worse. I don't like the yellow on
the bottom of the R.
Should have kept the yellow to only the circle part 3/4 of the way down, and
above.
3). Astronaut: Way too much yellow. Just leave the yellow to the
outline.
The best old logo is at 0:25, with the rocket shooting out of the basketball. I would have
gotten rid of the white and kept it only red and blue, but the overall design is much
better.
4). Black jerseys:
I don't like the yellow jumpman. Should have made it red to match the color of the
letters / numbers.
5). White jersey: This is fine, but both a red and yellow trim, is too
much.
6). Red jersey: Again, having a yellow and white trim, is too much.
Overall video:
They have the voiceover randomly say "championship caliber". That reeks of
desperation. If you're championship caliber, you don't need to say it out loud.
People will just know.
There also isn't a well defined story in the video. It's just guys wearing
jerseys.
Given the way the setup is with the setting split into two colors, and all of the color
coordinated basketballs, I was expecting the setting to be integrated into the
voiceover and overall story better.
If you're going to have a visual setting, then use it. Give us the meaning of the colors,
or hype it up somehow. Don't try to have the visuals of the two colors sit passively in
the background. Really incorporate it.
Otherwise, just do something simpler and have guys wearing jerseys in a gym.